For my final paper I plan on making sure that all of my grammar and spelling are perfect. I don’t want to have any little mistakes that cost me points off of my paper. my quotes need to me shorter and I need to add more of my own opinion into this paper. the overall goal of my paper is to be interesting and grasp the readers attention.  I feel as though I need a stringer thesis as well as stronger claim sentences that will make my paper more interesting and grasping. my plan is to ask my RA, peers, and roommates to read my paper over to make sure that I have all of the important information needed to have good structure in my essay.  my biggest challenge will be to make my paper shorter and more straight and to the point( my paper in broad at the moment), I will use office hours as well as technology like grammarly to make sure my paper is structured very well. I will send professor Emerson parts or paragraphs of my essay that I think need expansion and revision.