In todays world STEM has had a huge impact on the ways science technology engineering and math effect schools world wide. this aspect of most schools curriculum has impacted students from there job choices to there college and higher education decisions. With that being said the main goal of this is to educate students on subjects that they will use later in life. yo-yo Ma is renown musician that has won countless awards, he states that
“because the world economy is do hyper competitive, much of the focus in education these days fro Singapore to Shanghai to American schools is on STEM- science, technology, engineering, and math. as important as that is, it is short sighted. we need to add the empathetic reasoning of the arts to the mix-STEAM.”
this is an unrealistic and inefficient way to keep kids focused on the more complex and helpful subjects like STEM, if you add art into the equation there is too much going on for students to focus. they will lose track on there goal of learning more about STEM and become more focused on learning about art which is a subject that has no real meaning other than drawing and creating. art is far less important than anyone thinks it to be, it may strike imagination but engineering and technology do just that there is no need to add art into the curriculum.
I liked your post. Good job separating the long quote from the paragraph. Other than a few local errors within the paragraph, but those can be fixed easily. Good work.
Well done! Your argument is very convincing! This is a real possible danger! Did any of your peers comment on your naysayer paragraph? If so, please make sure that you approve their comments.